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Friday, August 6, 2004

What do you see,
man-almost-dead?
What do you see, there, inside your head?
Do voices seek? Does color leak?
Can you regrow your skin?
Can you have any fun?
What do you see?

What do you see,
child-never-born?
Is it ever dark, there, inside your head?
Do voices cry? Are colors bleak?
Can you grow without skin?
Can you love anyone?
What do you see?

What do you see,
woman-of-life?
Do you weep sins, there, inside your head?
Do voices sing? Does color speak?
Can you breathe with your skin?
Can death be undone?
What do you see?

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
� Copyright 8/6/94
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Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on January 10, 2008

the 3 characters you address are interesting choices. enjoyed

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 28, 2007

Erin,

What do I see? Beautiful words before me...powerfully penned. Your words make one think, make one see...well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on August 7, 2004

What do I see, poet-of-note? eyes that look, as well as see; words that speak, as well as flow; thoughts that talk, as well as think. Your curiosity feeds mine and I read silently, unable to utter past the lump in my throat. Your poetic voice, dear heart, colors our world. katy xox.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 6, 2004

Erin, excellent construction! Dawn

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 6, 2004

I see Erin doing her mind magic, manipulating
thoughts and words until they have just the right
combo to make the reader think! Superb!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 6, 2004

Good questions. Enjoyed the style of this one very much. Bravo!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 6, 2004

i see an qualatative introspective poem ... nice!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 6, 2004

So powerful Erin, this was outstanding,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on August 6, 2004

this is a fantastic poem both in construction and content, as i have said before, i really like prose poetry, it takes skill as much as does rhyme, if not more to find the right flow and structure

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