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Fell Down From a Mountaintop

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, August 12, 2004

I sat upon a mountaintop,
sat above below,
I sat upon a mountaintop,
sat below above.
And as I sat,
balanced between
the high and low,
I began to weep.
I sat upon a mountaintop,
where I began to weep.
I couldn’t think,
I couldn’t speak,
could only rock and weep.
I rocked upon a mountaintop,
I saw the heights
Mankind could reach,
and I saw the lows.
I reached to touch humanity,
stretched and reached,
and fell upon my brow.
I fell down from a mountaintop,
and now can only see below.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/12/04


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Reviewed on August 12, 2004
This one can make me fly through the wings of imagination beyond the earth atmosphere, where there are - no Ups and no Downs - and here and now are eternity. "Fell Down From a Mountaintop" is a poetic grandiose.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by James Daniels
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Good piece here, keep up the great work

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
WOW!!!!!!

Susan

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Perceptions of life on this mouton top.

I reached to touch humanity,
stretched and reached,
and fell upon my brow.
I fell down from a mountaintop,
and now can only see below.




Reviewed by Helga Ross
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Always provocative and thought-provoking your perspectives, Erin, delivered with effect, very poetically.

Other mountain perspectives, food for thought, also:
Why do some claim they've climbed Mount Everest? Because it's there.
Eastern philosophers and some others find their peace there.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Kinda puts me in mind of the story of Jack and Jill or humpty dumpty, although you fell on your brow, that had to hurt, little girl, better to go to see the doctor right now...

Gotta watch what you drink or smoke or eat prior to writing, dear friend Erin, I think you may have had an overdose...Peace, Ed & rufuz


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