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Emptying Self

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, August 12, 2004

I watched the Monsoon storm
gain ground in the sky.
Felt energy pulsing,
humidity seeping,
electricity igniting.
And I couldn’t contain
the power in my body.
So, I turned my palms up,
facing the sky, and I flung
the energy out, almost shouted
with the release. Transfixed,
I emptied myself, and I swooned.

When I reopened my eyes,
I saw the storm dissipating,
its turbulence transferred
to clouds building on the horizon.

Dull, blue skies above
made me weep. I need
passion, chaos and
the build-up of storms
to make me feel complete.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/4/04
 


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Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 10, 2004
A awe inspiring release of emotion and feeling Erin...
Love it...
Peter

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Powwerful write here. I like the concept of this piece. WOnderfully done.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Wonderful imagery in this powerful verse. So well crafted!

Reviewed on August 12, 2004
"Emptying Self" depicts the discussion of cosmological bodies,
finding an agreement through the lines of wise hands.

This poem prods the stallion of imagination to gallop
on the prairies of knowledge.

I have enjoyed a poetic magnificence.

Thank You for posting "Emptying Self", and for sharing Your art

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
a powerful write Erin

Reviewed by Angelica Young (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
I love this! :)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
I empty myself every hour or so, not exactly in the same way, but well it must be old age or an enlarged prostate...sometimes it almost feels as good as this poem sounds...Peace thru an Empty Self, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Erin, you prove the fact that we are all part of
energy, and everything is synergistic. However, most
people aren't aware enough to feel it as you do;-)
I wrote an article about this.Excellent poem!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
thats amazing to be so physically in tune with earth as you write......
must be sort of fun........great images here!

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
an interesting write
which touches ground

well done

john+


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