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The Storm

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, August 22, 2004

The Storm

It was early, that afternoon,
when the monsoon storm blew in, seems
the dynamics were laid right overhead
of this small mining city -- for thunderheads.

The storm came down from the mountain,
all you could see were roiling clouds;
black sky and black depth to the left and right,
birds just sitting were galed into flight.

You could hear hisses and cracklings coming,
the wind shredded the plants aside,
hail stones the size of peas and dimes
even in monsoon are rare in arid climes.

The air was filled with zinging, rain
poured down in torrents and streams,
lightning glared and thunders boomed,
like the sky had opened its womb.

The hair on my arms felt electric,
I laughed, reveling in might of the storm;
It roared back and slanted its force,
sending me running back into the house.

I suddenly thought of our rabbit,
all the cats had wetly straggled in,
taking a look at the back patio’s floor
I shivered as I opened the screen door.

The water was up to my ankles
and the hail made it glacially cold,
I sloshed to the back and peered through lattice
as my feet turned into big chunks of ice.

The rabbit was under the shell-camper,
looking a lot happier than me,
so I stumped my way back through ice-lake.
Nothing about this Elemental was fake!

The storm continued to linger above us,
its drenching was meant to sate
the wait of the dry-husked desert,
while bringing peace of mind to its heart.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/22/04



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Reviewed on August 22, 2004
(((erin)))

you capture the power of the storm brilliantly--those monsoonal storms can be vicious--why, what do you know, we're having one now :)

great poem!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 22, 2004
Most outstanding Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on August 22, 2004
Dear Erin,

Descriptive and vivid imagery portrayed. I even got a shiver whilst reading this. Great write.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2004
Love the descriptions and feelings of this write. I could really feel the chill!

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on August 22, 2004
This is an extremely impactful write. You pulled me right in, so much so that goosebumps rose on my skin.
Fantastic!
Chanti

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 22, 2004
If it keeps raining like that, you may have an ocean nearby, then I can come out and buy that corral, and still live near ocean too...have fun in that storm, it sounds like a blast...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed on August 22, 2004
"The Storm" depicts and deciphers the arcane of Nature with words from the lexicon of heedful observer.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 22, 2004
Smashingly image-and-visual-laden beauty, ms Erin! Me thinks nature listened in while your head longed, if only for a moment, to have Wisconsin in your midst... the flood-gates poured and 'mother' replied. For me, you are never better than when you paint nature with your broad, yet intimate brush-pen, and I'm instantly whisked away, into your words. God, I love this one! I especially loved the birds being 'galed into flight'... pure poetry, oh mistress of the mind pictures. Great stuff, oooo yeah. katy xox.

Reviewed on August 22, 2004
Wow Erin, This was outstanding and so excellent, Loved your poem here!

Reindeer


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