Dreamer Enters Glass
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, August 28, 2004
Dreamer? What do you see, there,
within your pain of glass?
As you take your naps?
Do you see horrors? And hopes?
Do you feel shudders
wrack your soul? Do you fly
everyday to escape your panes?
Dreamer? How do you feel, there,
within your shatter-fused soul?
Do you wish you were whole?
As you deliver your fragments
to us all? Dreamer?
What have you wrought?
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/28/04
Love Tinka
A very profound and thought provoking write, I was particularly drawn to the way you used the following lines:
within your pain of glass? and
Do you fly everyday to escape your panes?
Warm hugs
Elga
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Captivating write Erin...
Peter
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