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Lying Abed

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, September 10, 2004

Lying abed,
I saw a quotient in my mind
as I dozed before sleep, at the proper time.
It wasn’t in earthly geometrics,
yet, it had our equations sown down deep.
I saw diamonds unveiling twisted
angles unknown, saw circles
of paralleled stars dethrone; surreal,
but persuasively there.

Instead of lying abed in fright,
I jumped up, and yelled, “All right!”
And I reticulated myself to notebook’s design
to capture that moment in time.
It was dark, I couldn’t see, so I felt
my way out of me, succumbing
to all these radical waves, sensing
my cosmic grave – and delighting

in jumping out of my head,
since I couldn’t sleep,
lying abed...

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/10/04


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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Great write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Most Excellent Erin!!

I agree with Eileen!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Flashbacks are great memories sometimes...LOL! Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
... been there, done that, never found the words for it 'til now... Erin, me girl, when you 'draw' a picture of life, you go outside the lines, and for that I think you. After all, it's the space we're "forbidden" that invites us to explore. You are a mighty mind, indeed! love, katy xox. p.s. Adam is alright.. thanks. (smile)

Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Insomnia has never been this good. Wonderful write indeed!

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Amazing and complex composition , Erin which mirrors your soul and understanding..
Peter

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
this is the most awesome poem. mesmerizing with weird and wonderful images mixed in with a touch of humor and your wonderful way of bringing... closure. perfection. i wanna know how you did this.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 11, 2004
Damn I'm going to bed riight now and if I don't come
up with something like this, I'm filing a complaint!

This soars Erin, has me absolutely panting with envy
of that second stanza which is too awesome to describe!


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