Heat Me Wicked
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Monday, September 13, 2004
Seat me wicked
sea of green
waves are crashing over me
pounding rhythms in my flesh
urchins nibble at my breasts
seahorse shimmies up my dress…
Heat me wicked
sea of green
whirlpool flowing into me
flooding tunnel Venus seen
starfish holds me down to feed
sea profound has swallowed me…
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/13/04
Well crafted!
**Mari**
Excellent write, take care in that
turbulent sea of green, and its many
inhabitants :)
warm hugs
Elga
Love Tinka
Splendid...
Peter
gosh, this is a profoundly written, dark write--hope you're okay
imagery effectively conveys mood--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.