Combustion
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tuesday, September 21, 2004
She felt heat vibrantly envelope
her cells interior structures
barraged by showers of fire,
melting and remolding her will
into a being of torrid propensity.
She spun in sweeping circles
twirling out licks of heat
in her kindled intensity, feverish
and fugitive; she was aflame!
Her core burned like a furnace,
producing gyrating snakes of fire
that side-whipped and coiled
about her radiant flesh.
She wondered if she would implode
when inner fuels limit was reached.
Or maybe she would explode
into a space-flung nova
hurling her life-flames
beyond her ability to see;
then, she screamed with
agonizing ecstasy – and disappeared.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/21/04
to retrieve the arcane from the borax of pleasure.
"Combustion" is a Flower from a symbolistical garden, painted with the brush of creativity and scented with aroma of knowledge; poemized with emotions of an artful heart and poetized with words dictated by a masterful poetic soul.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
P.S.: Please disregard my prior comment of 09-22-04.
My Editor wasn't working. That is why I am reposting.
Thank You.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
"Her core burned like a furnace,
producing gyrating snakes of fire
that side-whipped and coiled
about her radiant flesh."
WOW
WOW breathtaking!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. WOW!!!!!!!!
well Penned
William ...peace
You can certainly write them so vividly, the heat radiating from this excellent write is all consuming. Beautifully penned Erin.
Warm hugs
Elga
Love Tinka
I love the imagery, I see you flaming by me in the
cosmic indigo night;-)