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Imagine -- Mirrored Tear: A Tribute to John Lennon

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

I wrote this a few months ago, as lyrics. Asked, well, maybe not specifically, a few people if they could see the music to compliment the words and Lennon. I can kind of 'hear' it in my head, but have no musical ability to capture the tone, pulse, flow and pathos I want. So I am posting it as poetry, which is what lyrics are, set to music, which adds, melds, limns and combines bringing a universal emotion to our senses of hearing and mind.

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Friday, September 24, 2004

In disbelief, we saw him fall,
the bullets shot us, too.
And as he fell we heard his cries,
and our wails of doom.

I took my heart into my hands
and offered it to him, this man.
He smiled with pain, and shook his head.
Smiled, and shook his head.

I shuddered with his agony,
I shuddered with my own,
and in his tear, I saw his fear;
where now would this man go?

Yes, in his eyes I saw a tear
I mirrored with my own. I shouted,
"No! don't die, my friend,
you'll leave us all alone!"

He tried to speak, to tell us all,
that love can open minds.
Once more I cried, “Stay, my friend.”
He shook his head, again.

I shuddered with his agony,
I shuddered with my own,
and in his tear, I saw his fear;
where now would this man go?

I threw my heart upon the ground
beside his fragile fallen form,
he pressed his tear into my mouth
to soothe my future years.

I held his head, he held my eyes,
searching for the means to die,
without a sound , he said goodbye,
and let his music go…

I shuddered with his agony,
I shuddered with my own,
and in his tear, I saw my fears;
where now would this man go?

I took his dreams, this man of song,
and tried to add my own;
I put his words into my heart,
and always let them flow.

We shuddered with his agony,
We shuddered with our own,
and in his tear, we saw all fears,
where now could this man go?

Imagine...

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 7/21/04
     


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Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
A wonderful tribute to a true star.
:)Sandy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
I think this would make a superb song Erin. I heard a tune while reading and will play it on my keyboard see what I come up with;-)
Excellent lyrics and soulful heartfelt tribute!

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
i really admired john lennon. wonderful tribute. -- Jeff

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Seems the greats are always envied and leave us too soon, this elicited more than a tear from me, I met Mr. Lennon in Central park when much I was younger, didn't ask for an autograph but he drew me a neat picture instead...what a down to earth person, enlightened he was I am sure of it...Peace, Ed *&* rufuz

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Dear Erin,

Imagine... Mirrored Tears most certainly, a superb tribute to John Lennon. You brought tears to my eyes with this heartfelt write, beautifully done, thank you for sharing.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Yuppers , Erin
Lennon was the man...the mainstay of the Beatles..
This is a touching tribute...
Peter

Reviewed on September 24, 2004
(((erin)))

i loved john's work, and he is missed

excellent lyrics and write--BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Great piece Erin for a great man. life at times isn't fair, hope he's in heaven. l&p G

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Great tribute..His Stawberry-fields kinda works to this..

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Because of this, I had to put on the collection. I may be from the wrong generation, but I still like John. Nice write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Yes I can hear the music....listen to it quite often!!

Excellent write Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
wonderfull written
great tribute

William ....peace & Love

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on September 24, 2004
Beautifully and poignantly captured. This would make a most amazing song and I could literally hear the music as I read it. Well done.
Chanti


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