Discretionary Distance
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, October 2, 2004
Where I live, in this mountain desert state,
discretionary distance becomes innate;
land of thorns, of fangs, of searing heat,
separation of self degrees the oblique
from sands arid acrimony of fright.
Hot rattle-snaked days and scorpion nights,
discretionary distances of lows and highs
purport protection from poison’s guise;
step softly, step slow – now, quickly,
let’s go – the cacti repent as we flee
to a distance discretionary.
To be free of these, take this non-guarantee,
to travel stark canyons and rocky slopes.
If you’re careful, you can keep your hopes.
Where I live, in Arizona’s deserted lands,
nothing is above wariness’ demands;
when summer sun is hidden in dark monsoon;
when coyotes chorus howls at dusty moons;
it’s best to keep a discretionary distance.
As lightning flares with electric resistance
and hair stands on end with frightening persistence,
desert people hide from barrens existence.
Gila monster feigns desiccated disinterest,
tarantula stalks on its predatory quest,
horned lizards lurk, armor entrenched,
and buzzards home in on decomposing stench.
Discretionary distance needs to be desert applied,
if you don’t want to end up like those who’ve died.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/2/04
discretionary distances of lows and highs
purport protection from poison’s guise;
step softly, step slow – now, quickly,
let’s go – the cacti repent as we flee
to a distance discretionary...."
Erin, these are great lines that grab me and pull me into
your fascinating poem of Arizona's desert lands. They also
remind me of why I love living by the sea. -gene.
the southwest desert comes alive through your sharp writing--BRAVA!
i love the images you've painted--stunning masterwork!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
favorite lines, hard to choose. if i must, it's: "hot rattle-snake days and scorpion nights" and "coyotes chorus howls at dusty moons" BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!
The closing lines flash up the light of harmony.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love Tinka
Chanti
Well Done!
New Zealand is a natural bird sanctuary. We have no predatory animals (outside the city!;-) lol!) and no poisonous ah.... anything elses - bar one small spider called the 'Katipo' which most of us have never seen! My children walk to school bare footed as I did when I was their age - shoes are often just a fashionable option!!!
Great write, thanks!
This is such an imaginative poem! Your talent has no bounds!