Scaffolding Spaceships
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tuesday, November 16, 2004
The form of an ark,
the arc of a rainbow,
the rainbow of a mind,
the minds of the many…
All are spaceships,
under construction.
It seems Mankind
has space traveling in its dreams.
The taste of a star,
the star of a cosmos,
the cosmos of an eye,
the eyes of the many…
All are concepts,
under construction.
It seems Mankind
views galaxies in its dreams.
The touch of a mind,
the mind of an idea,
the idea of a home,
the home of the many…
All are reality,
under construction.
It seems Mankind
feels responsibility in its dreams.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 11/16/04
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Best regards,
Leland
Love the title - cleverly written verse here ... masterfully created!! A joy to read!!
Best wishes,
Robert
All are spaceships,
under construction.
It seems Mankind
has space traveling in its dreams
yes, mankind's purpose is to dream responsibly and live up to the blueprints of his design ...
And this is one metaphysical and enlightening composition...
You pose the age old question....where is mankind heading..towards or away from from God..
Peter
Take care,
Sherry
"Scaffolding Spaceships" strikes my psychobilogical recorder.
I like the profoundity and the flowing of this composition. It did inspire me.
Thank You, Poet for adding value to Poetry!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU