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Ancient Child

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, December 16, 2004

Ancient child, lost in ennui, now resides
In human breast. Piercing age shows sorrow’s
Sad damage; memory lost, bequest denied.
Eon’s child realigns -- sets self aglow.

Unruly child, loosing shared perspective,
Clamors loud for sustenance; cries for more,
Sighs with dread, fearing time is relative.
Earthbound child redesigns -- then opens door.

Opaquing child, losing balance, weeps dry
Tears of sufferance. Chasing clouds of colored
Rainbows, tarries behind to question why.
Ebbing child, recombined -- again, implores.

Ancient child, counting epochs, waits for light
In solitude; seeking ways -- to ignite.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 12/16/04
     


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Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2004
Magical talent you have Erin! I have read many of your works posted here. I am in awe!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
A deep and thought provoking write, will need to read this several times Erin to absorb all the nuances.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on December 19, 2004
Lots of meat in this verbal stew. :-) Thank you, Erin, especially for the provocative write.

Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Very good and very interesting, have a happy holiday Erin. l&p G

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
I like the archaisms and that last couplet!

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Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
So profound, Erin. Just love this. It's so funny that we tend to think it will be our "adult" wisdom and learning that will lead to "enlightenment" - but it is the Ancient Child in us that is just waiting for true freedom and truth to bring us to the place of peace and fulfillment. Last two lines superb! It is no wonder that "heaven" is portrayed as being light, life and energy... like the atmosphere that surrounds children. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Soul-gripping verses, Erin. Thank you for sharing this powerful offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Incredibly moving. I feel the momentousnous, the timeless beauty of this poetry. -- Jeff

Reviewed on December 17, 2004
(((erin)))

a sensative, intuitive, GORGEOUS write you've penned--excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Erin,

Superlative write - beautiful imagery . . . "Piercing age shows sorrow's sad damage . . . " - excellent!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Very well penned Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on December 17, 2004
"Ancient Child" Voices a profound message.

It gives me an image of a pilot that landed on a desert area. This pilot walks to an Oasis; he drinks from its water, and sleeps... The desert wind blows the sand over his aircraft. He wakes up in the morning and all he can see around are dunes, some as tall as mountains, all around is sand. “HAVE I LOST MY MEMORY”, – he questions – as he walks looking for his airplane.

This is a philosophical-historic surreal and symbolistical composition of poetic compliance in artistic expression.

Healthier be the eyes that may read this, "Ancient Child".



Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Are we not all ancient children, believing, if you will, in reincarnation, we have suffered through these lives before and may do so again...Ed

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
This flows beautifully, Erin. Strong statement and profound images weave within your verses. Very nice!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
A well Penned piece


William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Silke Lance, Dr. Ph (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
Awesome write!!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 16, 2004
You ignited me with this one Erin! awesome thoughts and images! ever evolving!


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