Ancient Child
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Thursday, December 16, 2004
Ancient child, lost in ennui, now resides
In human breast. Piercing age shows sorrow’s
Sad damage; memory lost, bequest denied.
Eon’s child realigns -- sets self aglow.
Unruly child, loosing shared perspective,
Clamors loud for sustenance; cries for more,
Sighs with dread, fearing time is relative.
Earthbound child redesigns -- then opens door.
Opaquing child, losing balance, weeps dry
Tears of sufferance. Chasing clouds of colored
Rainbows, tarries behind to question why.
Ebbing child, recombined -- again, implores.
Ancient child, counting epochs, waits for light
In solitude; seeking ways -- to ignite.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 12/16/04
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a sensative, intuitive, GORGEOUS write you've penned--excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Superlative write - beautiful imagery . . . "Piercing age shows sorrow's sad damage . . . " - excellent!!
Best wishes,
Robert
Love Tinka
It gives me an image of a pilot that landed on a desert area. This pilot walks to an Oasis; he drinks from its water, and sleeps... The desert wind blows the sand over his aircraft. He wakes up in the morning and all he can see around are dunes, some as tall as mountains, all around is sand. “HAVE I LOST MY MEMORY”, – he questions – as he walks looking for his airplane.
This is a philosophical-historic surreal and symbolistical composition of poetic compliance in artistic expression.
Healthier be the eyes that may read this, "Ancient Child".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Take care,
Sherry
William .....Peace & Love