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Weakling

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, December 28, 2004

Do you become faint of heart, blue weakling?
Do you fade as you miss your soul? Can you
Not foresee how loss of time’s movement brings
An inner peace? Stay your tears, weakling blue,

For your fears won’t make dreams come true . Do you
View futures fantastic within your mind?
Do you divine a world where peace subdues
Constraints accrued by rabidness of blind

Fools? Do you decline your right to shine true ?
Sad weakling, avowals betrothed bring such gloom
To heart of stone that misses truth’s review;
Jungled by dark, pathetic weakling’s doom.

For you see fighting through debris of life
Will split your ideals with a god-like knife.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 12/28/04
  


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Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
Usually when I read rhymed verse, contemporary of course, my skin crawls. But Erin, you wear it well. Very nicely done!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on December 30, 2004
OutStanding!!!!
I so needed this right now
this is power
thanks so very much for sharing!!!

Reviewed on December 30, 2004
"Weakling" is a flower to show that in Poetry the season is always Spring.

Keep delivering the flowers of Your garden, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2004
Erin, this is a really emotional and thought-provoking well-penned composition, my friend. Excellent work, Poet! In a strange way, this piece reminds me of the phrase: “those who live by the sword, shall perish by the sword.” Have a great and safe Holiday Season. Take good care and be well.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on December 28, 2004
Excellent! Exceptionally vibrant language, Erin. Bravo!


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