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Spinning Webs

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Monday, January 3, 2005

Silly ego spins a web,
Capturing nothing,
But, self-delusions,
Awkward intrusions,
Descending occlusions,
Then, breaks under mind’s weight
In realization.

Fragile ego spins a thread,
Ceding everything,
Yet, offering null,
Loosing tattered soul,
Draining heart’s life flow,
Then, waits under world’s weight
In retribution.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 1/3/04

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Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Gonna have a long wait for retribution...Ed

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

(((erin)))

a strongly imaged slap of reality check--fantastic! :)

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

hope 2005 is your best year EVER!

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Erin,

Thought-provoking and exceptionally composed, "Spinning Webs" defines perfection - outstanding write!!

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

You hit the nail on the head Erin.

"Fragile ego spins a thread,
Ceding everything,"

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Another powerful read Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Ah our ego and it gets us in some positions where we run into trouble most often.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Amazing how we can be lost in self, then be brought into reality
with a jolt that makes us wonder where we've been...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2005

Quite a tangled web of egocentric dreams and lies you have penned here, Erin, and the payoff for both of these tattered webs are the same,, destruction. Well said.

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