Loneliness
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Friday, January 21, 2005
Days daze spreads finger-holds of depression
In subtle clutching – without forgiveness;
Poisons spirit’s blood; soul’s sight. Infection
Of repeated bleeds accumulates stress
In a mind long left behind, in a soul
That once was whole. Sorrowed emptiness peaks
In Time’s scythe of what could be, mind patrols
Maybe's, If's and We's – bald-featured and bleak.
Ages age and eons pass, stilled moments
Last never more than a breath, or a sigh,
In movements dance. Searching self brings torment…
Paladin! Restart time and redesign
Love completed… For death in life defeats
The miracle of eternal stars heat.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 1/21/05
love Tinka
Stephanie S. Sawyer
You've captured this so well it is tangible. Extremely well written. I love reading expressive poetry and this is a fantastic example. You are a credit to your craft.
Love Chanti
and it fits so well after reading Sue's poem Alone
a wonderful follow~up it fits the theme
thisis an excellent poem!!!
Masterfully crafted.
Mesmerizing. Hypnotic. Your words captivate the reader and make him/her feel your abject loneliness through your words. An amazing, powerfully poignant write--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(