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Loneliness

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, January 21, 2005

Days daze spreads finger-holds of depression
In subtle clutching – without forgiveness;
Poisons spirit’s blood; soul’s sight. Infection
Of repeated bleeds accumulates stress

In a mind long left behind, in a soul
That once was whole. Sorrowed emptiness peaks
In Time’s scythe of what could be, mind patrols
Maybe's, If's and We's – bald-featured and bleak.

Ages age and eons pass, stilled moments
Last never more than a breath, or a sigh,
In movements dance. Searching self brings torment…
Paladin! Restart time and redesign

Love completed… For death in life defeats
The miracle of eternal stars heat.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 1/21/05
 


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Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on January 19, 2009
Being lonely is not fun and you need to get out of that loneliness, live, life complete and not be dfeated. The stars up above have a message to you too leave and you can read your stars horoscopes each day and find a way to be positive that day. Things are not always as bad as they seem, we just have to recognize this. Good write.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on January 23, 2005
Erin, you are such a weaver of words! Yet, the words never overpower, but compliment your command of thought and the music of your poems.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 22, 2005
Most outstanding Erin!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Stephanie Sawyer
Reviewed on January 22, 2005
Far-reaching and effective.
Stephanie S. Sawyer

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on January 21, 2005
Dear Erin,
You've captured this so well it is tangible. Extremely well written. I love reading expressive poetry and this is a fantastic example. You are a credit to your craft.
Love Chanti

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 21, 2005
Outstanding!!!!
and it fits so well after reading Sue's poem Alone
a wonderful follow~up it fits the theme
thisis an excellent poem!!!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on January 21, 2005
Last line really hits home, Erin.
Masterfully crafted.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2005
Fantastic write!

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2005
I must say that Karla and Jerry have said it best you continue to mesmerize with your words.

Reviewed on January 21, 2005
Erin,

Mesmerizing. Hypnotic. Your words captivate the reader and make him/her feel your abject loneliness through your words. An amazing, powerfully poignant write--well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2005
I felt like I was back in New York, sitting in a coffee shop in Grenwich Village listening to the Beat Generation spew righteous indignation. "Loneliness" was true to its name, it craved and demanded . . . and got, lineliness. You used the English language very well here and I thoroughly enjoyed it.


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