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Armageddon Ballyhoo

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, February 2, 2005

I wonder about destruction, summoned
with the tongues of ecclesiastic’s adoration
while they bind ancient memories into
nightmares, without deigning to consider
any other form of godliness or worth.

I’ve wondered about ‘original sin’,
why it’s never been ordained a god,
or papal-ed with pomp and ceremony,
or buried in the dust of this planet,
where it belongs, with original flesh.

I’ve always been suspicious of speciousness,
fellator fabrications and godhead builders.
Cathedrals, towers, kneeling, bowing,
in essence, to a ‘God’. But, which God?
The God of Love? Of War? Of Peace?
No. I think we bow before the image
of ourselves, as we could be.

I’ve been thinking about the release of realism.
Whose perception creates reality? God’s?
Or, ours… Fidelity has a price when betrayed
by faith-leaders, when nailed to an existence
boundaried by ideals without the grace
of understanding factual flexibility
combined with efflorescing concepts
starts, and ends, with a Big Bang.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 2/2/05


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Reviewed on March 2, 2008
I don't think 'ecclesiastic's adoration' is 'summoned by their tongues' - it's already been foretold. As for being gods - no way - there is no god but - God. As for 'faith leaders' - let those who are without sin cast the first stone - they're only human. Like the rest of us...you make one think - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
Is it ironic that you've inspired preaching with this? In any event, nice work. Of course if you pin the tail on the god it's always going to be a god of our making. Can't know the unknown right? Csn't limit the limitless, right? So why do we even try? What does that serve if not our own sense of security?

See that? Preaching.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on February 10, 2005
As insightful and penetrating of the human condition as always, Erin. Your third eye remains wide open. Thoughtful and profound write, poet!

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on February 5, 2005
There are as many differant levels of understanding as there are people. God comes to us where we are, whatever color, creed or flag and we seek God with the limited tools in our grasp. I'm sure He makes allowances for this. Too bad we can't be as magnanimous of our fellow man. As long as we keep asking the questions, there's hope...

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
In overly simple terms, all faiths and religions are supported by the one great failing of mankind; to accept the fact that his trip will end, and that there will be little to show for our time and work and love on earth. Why is this so hard to accept when we see others die - human and animal? Why aren't we thankful and grateful for being born and having lived a life surpassing any previously lived experiences? Heaven and Hell are contemporaary and bearableby admitting that this is true.


Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
humanity stumbles along in its search for fidelity....somehow, my belief is that the ancient memories and perceived realities will find a place to call home in many hearts...and that the boundries of humanity will one day be viewed from the other side of the border where its existence and its images will be made clear...and pure divinity, untainted by the poisons of perception, can be sipped slowly on the beaches of understanding.

Reviewed by Sandy Knauer
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
Great job with a very difficult topic. Lots of good questions in here, Erin. I've always been suspicious myself, and wonder why more people don't look past the images planted before them and look into the mirror behind them.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
It seems that you have embarked upon a search for truth and if so, I wish you well, it can get very frustrating at times.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on February 3, 2005
interesting write

Reviewed by Ryan Kelly (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Hmmmmmmmmmm, what a delicous write. I ate every word, choking at times on the truths here. Someday I'll write like this.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Well this is a thoughtful piece and I do wonder if the big bang theory is how it will all end. Just watched the Last Day Of Pompeii a compelling documentary.

Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
Erin, you are bold and brave...these are words that so needed to be said and you did it so well. ty Lonny

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
There are some really compelling concepts twisted throughout this piece. Definitely a poem with dynamic points to ponder. Graceful write! :)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 2, 2005
I find I do bow to the god of 4:20, therein I know I am unreproachful and satisfied...INteresting thoughts this night, Erin...you have been letting your philosopher think a great deal of late...Ed


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