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A Study of Relativity

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, May 7, 2005

At the dawn of dusk undone, at the time
When heart has sung its farewell wish, and, when
Time has hung a weighty gift upon mimes
Countenance, there seems a lack, somewhere-been,

A study of a composition, like
Water painting ploys mixed up with coffee
And shots at a bar. So far the near, so
Unacceptable -- the far. As, the fee

Of random elements crushes and tries
To capture imagination of fleed
Realities ultimate sad disguise,
Free will. It’s true . Reality can be

Only as relevant as any mind
Can conceive. We -- can redo Humankind.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/7/05
  


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Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
Brilliant write! The seeds are being sown as we speak, Erin. I have hope, a shining blue crystal I hold in my hand. I think that it will be our children's generation to usher in a new day...

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
"We -- can redo Humankind."

There's evidence, me sweet, that this process has already begun... they just haven't gotten to ME or to YOU, yet... and they won't, of course, because we will be hiding in plain sight, someplace in your garden.

Once again, and it's always my pleasure, you have completely whacked me, brilliant Erin. Two reads is the norm, first taking it in slowly, then absorbing for the duration. I hope people follow your very effective punctuation, for therein lies your magic. You constantly amaze me with your depths. love, katy xox

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
The illusion is reality.... and the reality is that our free will has led us down a dismal road... to redo humankind? what a wonderful thought...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
there is a reality most mind's cannot conceive ... that's why it will take a bit of evolving to redo humankind ...


Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
PROFOUND WRITE....BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
This rises and sets like the moon.
blessin's
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2005
Now this is interesting but let them find their own clay.

Reviewed on May 7, 2005
A great write
God Bless
Michelle!


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