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When Dove Cries

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, May 8, 2005

Above the illusion
of dove’s delusion,
raucous wren
reaches across skies,
obliging wings
of rectitude-whys.

(face-backed, sunshine wracked,
by ignored infusion)

Above the delusion
of dove’s illusion,
racing wren
breaches fallen skies,
advancing wings
of fortitude-sighs,

(star-packed, façade cracked,
almost to fusion)

when dove cries.

(earth-tracked, flower racked,
color confusion)

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/7/05
 


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Reviewed on May 9, 2005
Power in your words, Erin, along with emotion and stunning imagery--I was hooked by the meter and secret rhyme pattern. Exceptional!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on May 9, 2005
A powerful flight indeed through this storm of molten tears and screams. The depth of principle and character with which you endow these feathered souls is quite exceptional in these brief tightly structured lines that deliver so much despite their brevity. In WHEN DOVE CRIES I read a great deal polished into a single gem of a poem: a parable, a fable, a tragedy, an adventure, a tremendously accomplished and gorgeous write.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 9, 2005
Powerful write....well done...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
Well written Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
Cool, Erin. I want to get this one. I feel it's a political statement about peace, deception, and fear tactics. But hellifino. Please write and tell me. BTW, I'll be sending His Purple Highness by to check this out. LOL ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
I hope this is not an intrusion,
Into what might be a self-imposed seclusion,
But to be quite honest I find this poem not to be a delusion,
And hope by and of our recent mutual decision,
That you will permit me to continue to comment,
If not then this will have to be my statement of conclusion...

Enjoyed this offering, Peace, Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 8, 2005
Star tracked, facade lacked, when eagle dives and dove dies. Great wordplay, Erin.

Ron


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