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Chamber the Bullet

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, July 6, 2005

Chamber the bullet of self-disgust,
flip off the safety, spin to win,
finger the trigger, and put the gun
to your head.

*click*

Falsify your reasons, grandiose
your name, remember innocence...
what the hell, life’s a game.

*click*

Can’t find your memories?
Can’t feel your life? Don’t
see any recourse? Maybe
you’re already dead.

*click*

Divvy up your emotions, epitomize
your blame, disremember happiness...
what the hell, it’s all the same.

*click*

Chamber your heart, jacketed in steel,
flip off the safety, spin to win,
finger the barrel, and put the gun
to your head.

*bang*

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 7/6/05
     


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Reviewed on March 5, 2008
Very exoteric, but also too esoteric... "Chamber the Bullet" is a picture of the modern society... Poetic mission accomplished, and message delivered.

Poemized to be poetized with wise and artistic-philosophic words,
"Chamber the Bullet" glows.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Henry Stevens
Reviewed on July 9, 2005
Dark, but excellent and creative word use. Henry

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on July 8, 2005
Just plain wonderful. Takes a genius to
come up with a metaphor like this. Color
me in awe. Pea <3 PS: Quotes you chose for
your bio page are fab!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 8, 2005
powerful in affect and delivery ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 6, 2005
A fantastic chilling poem, that is reminiscent of another
suicidal piece you did which I did a poem on, some years back.
You know how to rile the senses Erin, feel better now ?;-)

Eileen Theresa Waldron;-)

Reviewed on July 6, 2005
Chilling. This is outstandingly dark. Such deep despair so exquisitely written.

Reindeer

Reviewed by Edward Lupinacci
Reviewed on July 6, 2005
Compelling write but tell me there is still one chamber left
was it empty or loaded to up the odds

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Reviewed on July 6, 2005
EEKM,

Gripping and in-your-face. Way to shake it up...BANG...whattheheckwuzthat???

Peace sister,

B

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on July 6, 2005
Very graphic and frightening scenario
We must always cherish the gift of life Erin
Peter

Reviewed on July 6, 2005
Erin,

Powerfully poignant, sobering write--I hope you're okay. :(

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(


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