I Am Nothing When I Am Alone
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Wednesday, September 21, 2005
I am
Losing too many poems,
I am
Loosing too many poems,
I am
Nothing when I’m alone,
I am
noising too many poems,
I am
titling too many scenes,
I cannot
be all I am to be if
I lose too many poems,
If I’m nothing when I’m alone,
If I cannot see my poems,
I cannot be all I am to be if…
I can’t remember my poems,
I am nothing when I’m alone.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 9/17/05
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Safi
Very heartfelt emotions in your writing.
When we turn that hypercritical eye inward, oh what sights we shall see. We are nothing and everything and all in between as we dance along that line from storyteller to story. You sing your conflict with amazing clarity.
Peace,
B
nice read, erin, much enjoyed.
peace,
carolyn
The poems you do herein choose,
Do for me, when the chance comes to read them,
Seem to help center the world in general,
I always do find your poetry does for me amuse...Ed
I will not write it if I cannot get your permission, for the idea of this story comes from your poem.
Sandie may Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love Tinka