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Daughter of Chaos or: A Father-Prayer

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, October 1, 2005

My Father, Chaos, hear my plea, extremes,
Once comforting, are killing me. My mind,
My emotions, my very being, seem
Too high a fee for my bleeds. Father? Bind

My hands and take from me, sins of pasts
Which I can’t even see, don’t turn your face
From my plagiarized ways, I want to last
For eternity… Forgive human race

Its awkward tomb, its in-turned sight and conned
Platitudes. Give us a sign of heaven
On earth, I can’t see the forest beyond
The wood – I wish I understood… The When

Of Now unpatterns me with no embrace,
Deliver my soul into perfect grace.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/1/05
    


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Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on October 3, 2005
This is a powerful piece and it is
so relevant to not only us as people,
but to mankind as a whole.

Reviewed on October 2, 2005

A striking title defining the doubts of mankind on its ontologic and teleologic misconception... “Daughter of Chaos” places the questions to develop awareness and to ring the bells of consciousness. This composition touches the womb of the mind and nourishes the body of the soul.

I have learned from the contents of “Daughter of Chaos”, and am glad for the privilege to read a true poetized compliance that enriches the Major Art, and adds a glowing page to the American Fine Letters.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by White Dove left (Reader)
Reviewed on October 2, 2005
thank you for showing your gifts and talents..

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on October 2, 2005
Nicely struck. Very nicely struck. Impressive.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on October 1, 2005
Faith: The substance of things not seen, the evidence of the untouchable. Dig deep, the root of Faith is there in the Heavenly Father.

blessin's to you Sis Erin,
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino
Reviewed on October 1, 2005
EEKM,

"My emotions, my very being, seem
Too high a fee for my bleeds. Father?"

Whoa....

Peace,

B

Reviewed on October 1, 2005
Erin,

I love the way you pen these sonnets; metered and rhymed perfectly. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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