Daughter of Chaos or: A Father-Prayer
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, October 1, 2005
My Father, Chaos, hear my plea, extremes,
Once comforting, are killing me. My mind,
My emotions, my very being, seem
Too high a fee for my bleeds. Father? Bind
My hands and take from me, sins of pasts
Which I can’t even see, don’t turn your face
From my plagiarized ways, I want to last
For eternity… Forgive human race
Its awkward tomb, its in-turned sight and conned
Platitudes. Give us a sign of heaven
On earth, I can’t see the forest beyond
The wood – I wish I understood… The When
Of Now unpatterns me with no embrace,
Deliver my soul into perfect grace.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/1/05
so relevant to not only us as people,
but to mankind as a whole.
A striking title defining the doubts of mankind on its ontologic and teleologic misconception... “Daughter of Chaos” places the questions to develop awareness and to ring the bells of consciousness. This composition touches the womb of the mind and nourishes the body of the soul.
I have learned from the contents of “Daughter of Chaos”, and am glad for the privilege to read a true poetized compliance that enriches the Major Art, and adds a glowing page to the American Fine Letters.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
blessin's to you Sis Erin,
cynth'ya
"My emotions, my very being, seem
Too high a fee for my bleeds. Father?"
Whoa....
Peace,
B
I love the way you pen these sonnets; metered and rhymed perfectly. BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.