Be Still, My Heart, You Beat Too Loud
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tuesday, October 4, 2005
Be still, my heart, you beat too loud,
Eternalized with ages proud,
Be still, my heart, you beat too loud.
Be still, my heart, you ascertain
Sad hollowness I can’t contain,
Be still, my heart, you beat too loud.
Be still, my heart, your time has come,
You’re sorrow-worn and far from home,
Be still, my heart, you beat too loud.
Be still, my heart, you beat too loud,
What once was loved is not so proud,
Be still, my heart, you beat too loud.
Be still, my heart, your measured heat
I cannot feel, I cede defeat,
Be still, my heart, you beat too loud.
Be still, my heart, it’s time to rest
Sad hollowness of outlawed guest,
Be still, my heart, you beat too loud.
Be still, my heart, you beat too loud,
Eternity is for the proud,
Be still, my heart, you beat too loud…
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/4/05
The beat is very emotional and sometimes the rhythm tells all. May yours never miss a beat.
"Be Still, My Heart, You Beat Too Loud" is a piece of poetic grand.
Keep posting, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Boy, I understood this all too well...it hits kinda close to home. I have to say, though, I never thought about it that way...
Love ya,
Lori
An excellent write that beats from a poetic soul--fantastic write!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hugs, Trish
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