Individual Reality
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Wednesday, October 26, 2005
Astronomical elements of fantasy birth,
Spatial perceptions of bio-unworth,
Primitive impediments of man-made earth
Complicate aspirations of individual infinity.
I am living a dream within a reality,
With sentimental feelings of culpability.
Exponential sacraments of mythical birth,
Spiritual collections of soul-unworth,
Primeval predicaments of god-made earth
Exacerbate aspirations of individual reality.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/24/05
It would require a few days of philosophical research to comment on
this composition on its multifaceted psycho-scientific-art-cultural level, therefore, I limit my comment to:
IMPRESSIVE, STIMULATING, INSTRUCTIVE, BRAIN CHALLENGER, ART IN SCIENCE AND BEAUTY, I was looking a poem with...
"Individual Reality", E U R E K A!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU,
Apprentice poet by the Grace of The Mother-Poet.
Love Tinka
I love the way you write and rhyme; this one is excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.