I must agree with dear Andre below ...



As in one of your past constructs, I also find another sequence of events happening, either consciously, or sub-consciously.



An awareness of something of little or no importance leading you into the ability to respond aesthetically to these strong feelings about this awareness, leading you then to the realization of your accountability for what you say or do in conjunction to this revelation or disturbance, leading you finally to the imaginative ability to make a descision for yourself that will either enhance, or defeat your own existence.



Richard the Intrepid

“INCONSEQUENTIALITY”... This poem talks about someone who is fighting to make a life’s decision; someone that knows the direction of light, but has to remain between darkness and half light; someone who has a lot of responsibility, and can’t define the priority of his/her life; and thinks that creativity isn’t enough to prevent him/her from losing his/her mind.

This writing sounds from someone that has completed a cycle of spiritual/existencial research; and felt lost in that particular moment and just let the state of mind flow.

I also enjoyed the comments of Dr. Marvin Kirsh ~ below.

Reading Your works, Poet Erin Elizabeth Kelly Moen is always a learning enrichment.

Gratefully,

Your proud admirer,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Dear Erin: I cannot say I (or anyone)can have a more frustrating experience than with shallow regimentated thinking. The world can change for good or bad depending on alight weight in the wind, but it always still changes if the wind still blows,less someone label it inconsequential and not the bio-undegraderable molded plastics that not only can make our lives temporarily easier but also can can be found equated to objective reality by those those weak enough to want life easier all the time as a established standard.
The word oppression, become a gross understatement once one finds this less than ideal mentality roaming the hallways where the ground works for our social futures are laid.
Marvin