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Circles In My Ceiling

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, August 8, 2006

Circles in my ceiling
beckon me to see
through sheetrock layers
of homologies of futured
backward remedies
producing feelings of
incompleteness
replete with ringing bells
of commonality.

Circles in our ceilings
beckon us to see
through sheetrock flavored
pathologies of futures
backward calamities
inciting feelings of
obtuseness
defeat by ringing bells
of insubstantiality.

Circles in life’s ceiling
beckon me to see
through sheetrock players
of anomalies of future
awkward families
colliding feelings of
absoluteness
a feat of ringing bells
of inconsequentiality.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/8/06
    


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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 9, 2006
These thoughts ring harmoniously as creative word sculpting, and homologize in my own mind on disparate levels of agreement.

Mysteriously done Poet ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 9, 2006
Wonderful write Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on August 9, 2006
Wonderful play on words.

Reviewed on August 9, 2006
This is exquisite writing, Erin; I was absolutely mesmerized by the power of your pen! Excellent.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
The circles of these stanzas pulls this reader deep inside an expansive vision of being and beingness, on some levels profoundly absurd, on others profoundly profound:-)
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
So much can be read into these lines and interpretation will be subjective depending upon the reader's viewpoints. It provoked quite a bit of introspection in my case and I could identify.
Great work
Chanti

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
circles in the ceiling are the concentric forces life adheres to above and below us ...


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