Kool write like a tongue twister
Enjoyed much
Thnaks for sharing

You amaze me with powerful, succinct verse that makes one think. Well done, Erin! I love the way you write.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Now dear Erin ...

Explorer of words and inner shadows, digger of jewels in life's cesspools ... the challenge is to discover who "kisses" really is and offer the elusive muse a glass of ten year old Shiraz to placate the buggers anger with why the sun's yearly passing through the center of the imaginary sphere, containing all the celestial bodies, gives him gas.

Breathe ...

If I may be so bold Ms. Moen ... let us toast to dreams fulfilled, and those longings for wholeness and notoriety to have their season of full spread wings.

Unity unwavering ...
Richard Lloyd cederberg

You kissed the page well with your wishes...lol!!

Love Tinka

When wishes kisses kisses kisses wishes
and kisses wishes wishes to kiss wishes kisses
then...
there will be a lot of wishes and kisses.

A good poem of wordsplay.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Enjoyed the rhythm and playfulness of these lines--made me feel as if I'd been kissed and wished upon until I got dizzy:-)
Aberjhani