Darkness powerfully conveyed; well done, Erin!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

I can only concur with the feelings expressed by the board...there is a darkness that pervades the Globe at the moment, it's shadow is cast by the divisiness concocted by selfish power hungry individuals...divide and conquer that is their plan.

Paul.

i agree with Andy ... still, some have not learned the mistakes of the Third Reich ... people still judge each other on cultural and religious differences ... the world is evolving and deevolving simultaneously ... a most dire message within this poem ...

"Shallow separations
Deflect dawning sun’s
Shadowed reparations."

I smell fascism on a Nazi scale.
Iran needs to tread very carefully

It seems that no matter how many times history repeats its bitter lessons, humanity refuses to learn. Thank you for employing your poetry as a tool for knowledge and awareness.
Aberjhani

I see many precursors to the coming mark of the beast spoken of in Daniel and Revelation.

This could very well be one.

It also reminds me of the scourge of segregation. It also would make all these people easy marks for mad snipers.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

As long as people allow themselves to be SHEEPLE, "Dawn of Death" will receive its prize.

This composition is self-explanatory and I have learned here by reading another page of poetic poetics in "Dawn of Death".

May Your pen be kept in jar of ink scented with aroma of Justice, leaving it only to write what Poetry dictates under the light of revelation.

Long healthy creative life, Poet.

In admiration and gratitude,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Non-muslims already pay the dhimmi, a separate and extra tax in Muslim dominated countries. There will never be reparation or reconciliation while divisive and marginalization laws like this are passed.