Too Much Freedom... and Companion Piece
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Tuesday, November 7, 2006
Pundits pontificate education.
Journalists free-journal life-exists.
Religions self-alliterate
What must Be,
To whose detriment...
(I think associations
Of free thoughts hold more weight,
Even separately combined,
Than knowledge,
Superciliously designed.)
People proliferate, sometimes
Without edification, life-existing
Self religions literacy of
What must Be,
To their detriment...
(I feel re-assimilations
Of free thoughts hold more un-boundaries,
Especially combined,
Than knowledge,
Supra-egotistically aligned.)
Poets pontificate emotions.
Writers write of life-existing.
Self-religions are the hardest to kill
To be Be,
To our detriment…
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 11/7/06
Companion piece:
To Be…
Thank you, for relaxing
The pressure on my soul, world.
Even when it doesn’t matter,
And, especially, when it does.
Be, as a noun, resides, world.
Being, as a verb, and a noun,
Sees such pain, it resounds
Beyond any beyond.
Thank you, for reviving
The thoughts of my soul, world.
Even when I don’t matter,
And, especially, when I do.
Being me is a verb, world, and
A noun, being as in seeing.
Seeing pain, it compounds
Beyond any beyond…
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 11/7/06
Both are exceptional, but the second resonates hope...more, please. These are well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.