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Ugly Ego, Beautiful Id

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, March 22, 2007

Ugly Ego, reared inside, bares its teeth,
Recognized, slipping slyly past blind eyes.
Beautiful Id, girths its smile, slow-released,
Perceived-wise, skipping softly…

Fetid Ego, trapped inside, fangs its teeth,
Petrified, slipping slowly past old eyes.
Natural Id, earths its smile, time-released,
Vision-wise, slipping softly…

Dying Ego, wails inside, blunts its teeth,
Agonized, skipping swiftly past new eyes.
Cosmical Id, births its smile, death-released,
Freedom-wise, weeping softly…

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/22/07


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Reviewed by Gloria Gay
Reviewed on March 24, 2007
Amazingly original.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Thought provoking!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Interesting life-trip, Erin. Well done.
Love and {{[{{hugs}}}}},
Leland

Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Erin,

Regret? Perhaps...having lived, yet not lived...sad. Excellent, thought provoking excellence!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
I had fogotten how deep and sensible you can be, Poet Friend.
This is remarkable in composition, and good enough for "in sight" storage. Tank you for sharing such thinking. - Bill

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Erin,

Excellent poem. You manage to take me through life in three verses.

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 23, 2007
Wow, Erin, this is deep, powerful. This will have many meanings to the myriad who read and study it. To me, I see a crotchety self-serving young man who has a good heart, but hides it. As he ages, he mellows, still hiding his heart, and in old age, dying, recognizes his mistakes, missing all he has lost, but too late, and he grieves from the soul. An excellent poem!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
In sense this too reminds me of where my head was at tonight writing "Bulwer's Bligh in Bed" but in another sense...of aging.
Enjoyed this side step into yet a different thought of same...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~


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