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Ribbon Rain-Cloud

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, April 13, 2007

Ribbon Rain-Cloud was but a child
When called to head her family’s
Vanguard of weight. Delighted,
She swept ahead, squeezing,
Through her diaper, a sprinkle
Of rain, excited by her self-ability!

Ribbon rain-child strutted her ‘stuff’,
Wimpled by larger voices coming behind
Her silken thread to the planet.

Ribbon rode the front of the storm,
Dipping and dashing before behind,
Her target, to please herself!

Ribbon Rain-Cloud was but a child,
She tried to salve the ragged edges
Of eternities of weight. Deflated,
She fell below, treading,
Through diapers-impervious, a drop
Of small rain, following her death.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 4/13/07
      


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Reviewed by Gloria Buono
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Very interesting and and entertaining. Who would think a tiny droplet Ribbon Rain-Cloud could mean and do so much. This is so cute and made my first laugh today. Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria

Reviewed on April 14, 2007
Erin,

I wish I'd written this: a StormSpinner kind of write. I love the imagery; the birth, life, death of as storm vividly imagined and penned. Yes. Saving this, you've outbested yourself.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on April 14, 2007
At my earned senior age I try to not be in contact with diapers of any kind. However, I accept those in this wonderful and sweet poem. Imagination with you is but a half-cup of coffee, I'll bet.
Drink Up!
- Bill


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