Deconstruction Begins
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Sunday, August 12, 2007
Goodbye crappy
Mechanical pencils,
Your listing ways
Of up or down are clowns,
There are moments
More final than Death.
Goodbye preachy
Ridiculous sonnets,
Your listing ways
Of right or wrong are long-ings
No more alive,
More final than Life.
Goodbye stupid
Self-assessing wordings,
Your listing ways
Of back and forth are worth
Nothing, life is
More final than death.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/12/07
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I love these words ; life is more final than death. Wow! truer words were never spoken.
Your wordings are never stupid; there is a sadness, an unwillingness to let go, yet somehow, a strength in letting go to free your pen to try new things: inspirational, in a way...I look forward to the unveiling. :) Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
what a pwoerful little un.narcissistic message....give up the ghost kind of feel to it
amen
ness
Love and many big Hellos to you, Suzie :-D
something about this line rings true in my mind.
i cannot work out what it is or what its application or relevance to my life is but i had to tell you there was something in this line that wow'd me.
deconstruction begins...
you are saying good bye to these forms and ways and means of writing... what are you saying hello to?
every vice given away is usually filled with another...
good luck.