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Original Birth

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, October 9, 2007

I’ve never come out
Of original birth,
Fate, I mean,
Never figured out
The pain, I mean,
The sin is palpable.

I mean, is it
A sin to be born?
Into past illiteracy?
To not knowing, really,
How we are here?
Then, we were young,
More culpable to our
Future thinking. Maybe,

If we don’t ever come out
Of original birth,
Life, I mean,
Never prove ourselves,
The pain, I mean,
The sin is palpable.

I mean, is it
A sin to be born?
Into present’s technology?
To now knowing, really,
The path of our here?
Then, we were growing,
More culpable to our
Now thinking. Maybe

If no one comes out
Of original birth,
Death, I mean,
Never wines about
The pain, I mean,
The sin is palpable.

I mean, is it
A sin to be born?
To finally future posterity?
To see, knowing really,
That we are adult,
More culpable to our
Past thinking? Maybe…

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/9/07
     


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Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Beautiful write which leaves one with perhaps more questions than answers, but then isn't that what life is about? Nice write...

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
lots of burning questions well written and thought provoking

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 10, 2007
Erin,

Most original and palpable.

Reviewed on October 9, 2007
Erin,

I don't think it's a sin to be born; the sin was given us thanks to Adam and Eve; it's an unwanted gift. Deeply thought provoking and personal; well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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