Very interesting poetic and philosophical
speculations.
I believe in becoming responsible. Caring for the world and changing it by changing ourselves. This implies acknowledging our sacred nature.

You have certainly succeeded in writing a very thought-provoking piece!

Axilea

"man is a god in the making" - Zoroaster ...

So many thoughts come to mind from this poem, the 12 apostles, Adam and Eve, man's attempt to become god-like, and my list goes on. Another, thought - How can earth continue to sustain life if we continue to kill Mother Earth?

God bless you. Kathy

Beautiful write. Unfortunately we have not moved towards God-birth. We have let our spirits die for the love of earthly goods. We all know they are corruptible. Unfortunately, so are we.
God Bless,
Lew

'A world should extrude the beginnings
Of Us!'

To squeeze out our beginning is to become who we are: God

'So starts the adventure
Of Gods on Earth. Now, a heavily populated
Orb of unsustainable worth…'

We have failed!

'Mankind has gone beyond Man,
Becoming Humanity, who needs
To fulfill their god-birth.'

We are God becoming man with less and less god juice being squeezed into the mix. Soon, the forgetting will be complete

Twelve has much meaning in numerology circles. Twleve signs of the zodiac, twelve months, twelve diciples. This piece poses some interesting questions.

Walt

"Is Man an Olympian God?"… This is a magic title… thoughts’ striking!

One of the greatest problems of our time is that the majority of our scholars in any given field of science is under hypnotic trance through DNA records from the Roman-Greek Empire. They won't get rid of it as long as they use the EMPIRE's words.

I have enjoyed the reading of this magnificent composition, "Is Man an Olympian God?"

Records show that the Olympus dwellers were cloned from man developed from the best SACRAL seeds. (Sacral from Latin SACER from Greek HIERON, SACRUM, HOLY/SACRED) – That is how the symbolism of the holy trinity came to life. The SACRUM is a triangle inside an OVAL arch. (THE OVAL…?)

The word "god" is a contraction of German Latin Norse words: Grüss ODIN/TEUS?DEUS, meaning I SALUTE ZEUS. Before it was DEUS which is the Latin version for ZEUS. The Germans wrote it as GOTT, and it became GOT in English up to half of the eleventh century, then it was officialized as GOD by the beginning of the twelfth century.

"Is Man an Olympian God?"
– No! The Olympian dwellers were cloned from Man!

It gives me a great pleasure when a poem challenges me.

I am grateful that the author of "Is Man an Olympian God?" has allowed this jewel to add value to the treasure of Poetry.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

“Finally! Man has sprung from
Twelve loins, divided by two, separated
By minds design!”

I love this!
Your pen makes me feel like I haven't been meeting my potentials...
Great...another inspiration to add to the thousand others!
Now, what do I do with them?

"I don't feel very Olympic."

Man, this could force me into powerful mind games with myself and get me motivated!! LOL!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

well written work that is thought provoking and real

Wow!!!!!!!!! Erin, my dear, the way you write, you make mankind godlike...but, like you, am not feeling very godlike. For starters, gods don't feel pain...or sadness......a most wonderful, yes, creative mind/pen you have; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

My new favorite of yours. :)