I don’t know
What I smell like
On my neck, anymore.
Besides cigarette smoke,
And molecules of beer burps,
And copied cats and daughters
And over-timed metallic life.
Isn’t that okay?
Don’t I smell good,
Anymore? Not the metal
Time, self-mind or old-life,
But, the now-flesh? Trips to
Tucson malls, angled in between,
Shouldn’t detract from the smell
Of ever timed whatever me.
Isn’t that okay?
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/19/08
This is thought provoking excellence - your life, on your skin - beautifully penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
This is very intriguing... "No Smell Left" stimulates self-awareness although it seems to depict flesh's chemistry. I like the contents of this composition.
Appreciatively,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU