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Soft Nipple or: Of Life

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Monday, September 15, 2008

As the nipple
Dips from view,
On the right, owner glimpses,
Sees the left
As a serious,
Uprightish version,

Of Life.

The slope(s) are
Obvious, in every thought-way.
I’ve glimpsed nipples, we all have. We’ve
Suckled, without much thought,
Like in a Sit-Com moment

Of Life.

Sometimes, pools of dark
Come back, revisited, looking
And lacking, of course, the full
Force of rebeing … an idiot.
Sometimes, hell is glimpsed,
Or lived, a lifetime within a moment

Of Life.

As far as nipples,
They’ve slipped from view.
Left or right, it doesn’t
Flatter what’s left, here,
Our own cripples
of upright revisions

Of Life.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
9/15/08 Copyright ©

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 17, 2008
Interesting perspective on the journey we are all a part of in this life....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Interesting write, clever title! EXCELLENT, Erin; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on September 16, 2008
Title brilliant, as is this write: as we age, the nipples go soft. Not always with life. Sometimes it has hard edges that bang and bruise the tender tissue. This one is powerfully imaged and penned. You always make one think! Well done, Erin.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

My favorite part:

"Sometimes hell is glimpsed,
Or lived, a lifetime within a moment
Of life."

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
love the lines:Sometimes, hell is glimpsed,
Or lived, a lifetime within a moment


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