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If I Thought...

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Monday, April 13, 2009

If I thought
As strongly of the ‘Matrix’ movies,
Like Doc, wouldn’t
I think AD was a figment,
Inside of a computer?

If I thought
As patriotically of a
United States, like Andrew,
Why couldn’t I digest truths,
Inside a mental-mind?

If I thought
As musically of experienced
English-states of frames, like
Peter, shouldn’t I, ultimately,
Be freed by music?

If I thought
As numerically of growths
Gross, like Lawrance, couldn’t
I understand peripheral loss,
As a development plan?

If I thought
As differently of worded
Affairs of humanity, like David,
Why wouldn’t I laugh,
Like a god of displacements?

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
if i like the conceptual progression of thoughts in this poem so wouldn't i say i'm beholden to their passing arrival?

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
I like the special thought process in this one which is presented with a unique texture that makes the mind spark up and think...well done.

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Beautifully composed as a river flows gently, yet leaving one with much to reflect upon...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Erin,

Don't think so much; you'll just give yourself a headache! Seriously, this is thought provoking, as most of your writes are. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
very interesting write-lots of "ifs" to think about


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