What’s down? Even better,
Down is known to most,
But never really discovered.
I want to go Down…
Not past, back, I want
To be born, again, every where
I was before, and more,
And less, and, whatever
Co-exists betweens the eens.
I want to go Up…
Not rising, raising. I want
Everywhere I was, again, where
Ever she is, I am again. Like,
Whatever comes my way,
Existing between nows.
Well, Down… Better even
Up, reknown to most,
While, never really recovered.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/21/09
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This is fine capture and exploration.
John
fee
though I'm almost certain I'm missing something. I have
it on good authority that if I were to do it over again
I'd do the same dumb things, and perhaps give up scotch,
and that I can't risk. -gene.
Hmmmm. Wouldn't mind a do-over, either, only if I knew then what I know now. Unfortunately, we only get one spin on this merry-go-round called life ... dangit. LOL Interesting word play and write, well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.