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Saturday, June 20, 2009

Be a neat freak
Be a cool mother
Be a good wife?

Be a good fuck
Be a neat human
Be a cool other?

Be a cool flick
Be a good happy
Be a neat being/god?

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 6/20/09

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Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

always, we attempt to be better or live up to expectations that sometimes are not fair

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 21, 2009

maybe in my next lifetime ...

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 21, 2009

Hell yes, Erin, why can't you be perfect? -gene.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 21, 2009

I read this several times and with each reading I liked it more. We all look in the mirror, either a real mirror or an imaginary in our heads mirror and question our short comings and sometimes those of others. There are never any real answers though...we can just be the best we are and if others don't like it...too bad for them.

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Fee

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 20, 2009

Well this is interesting. I'm not sure how to read it. I laughed at a few of the questions and I cringed at others. I may tell someone to go f themselves if they me most of these. Enjoyed.

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