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Funny, funny, or funny What...

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Thursday, March 3, 2011

It’s funny, even as I step forward,
I step back. Not enough momentum, right
Now. Not enough of not enough, of the right
To step forward, neither side; it’s the stepping
Back that wins. It’s funny, how right things are,
Pegged together, like a piece of paper, crammed
Into a non-mass. Then, we can strike!!?! Haha, sillies,
Pierce what? Sometimes, it feels like my heart is torn,
Into slices. Other times, like voids of letters. Maybe this
Battle will see some insight. I’ll let you know if I see it>
Than it really is, or, sheez, whatever. 

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/4/11


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Reviewed by Parker Davis (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2011
Overly punctuated nonsense...you seem preoccupied with copyrighting your "work" check the soles of your feet for stolen poetry!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 4, 2011
Every minute of every day is a constant battle to remain optimistic no matter what the obstacles are. Keep marching forward....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 4, 2011
not funny haha, Erin, but funny peculiar, i sense;
demanding examination of self and direction.

John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on March 4, 2011
Erin, I would like to think it's funny, for both of us,
but then what I feel is like sad or, sheez, whatever...

-gene.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 4, 2011
interesting thoughts to consider!

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
Reviewed on March 4, 2011
Erin, Sometimes stepping back is good because then you can examine the situation before taking that step forward again. First step to healing the heart is getting it out!! Shout if you have to!! This poem is very good because you are taking a step!! Your not just standing there. Keep stepping forward even if it is difficult and you will see some insight! Take care, ~Chessly

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on March 4, 2011
Much food for thought.
I like the momentum idea- haunting.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 4, 2011
Sadly instead of humour I sense a lot of confusion or pain perhaps behind this write...
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