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So Sweet Goodbye

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, March 26, 2011

So sweet it seems cool breezes spring at me
With hint of warmth as day speeds by. So sweet
Soft peeking green, no more to hide. And see
How breezes blow on by, so sad, so sweet?

And now it seems new life is born, so sweet,
A reoccurring theme within a dream.
Soft how again can life re-die? So sweet
The spring of life goes by. And so to dream…

Again it seems cold winter chases me,
Without the warmth of days gone by. So sweet
Soft memories abide, no life can see
The end of time. As season flows so sweet,

It waves its greening tendrils as it flies,
So sweet I used to be, again, goodbye.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/26/11
  


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Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 27, 2011
This is fine writing, Erin, impressive
in thought and form. Love the phrasing and line
breaks, the control, the repeats and emphases.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on March 27, 2011
I love the rhyme scheme, Erin. And the rhythm
of your sweet goodbye. -gene.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 27, 2011
sad in its own way but the promise is there!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 27, 2011
Very captivating write Erin...enjoyed and loved the almost bittersweet feel to this one...
fee

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 26, 2011
Wish we all could say good-bye to winter, though we are expecting some snow again tomorrow...lovely NJ weather...e


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