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Butterfly Monsoon

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, June 29, 2012


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Butterfly flits
Under my sprinkler’s reach,
Wisps up and out and
Down again. Thunder
Rumbles mutteringly. Butterfly
Twists and lifts, seemingly
Crazily, settles on a dead flower head,
Wing-closed, enjoying the sprinkler-mist.
Thunder baritones closer. Wind whooshes
Artificial rain all over me as patched blue
Skies wink with hidden glee! Lightning stabs
Air, thunder applauds, noisily! Then, Now is
Shushed, for minutes... One last thunder, throatily
Trebles away. No monsoon yet, for arid land. Even
The butterfly has left.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Photo by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Copyright 6/29/12
   


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Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 6, 2012
Tremendous writing, Erin.
Kudos!

john

Reviewed by Shirley Houston
Reviewed on July 4, 2012
I can see this beautiful scene played out in a backyard while I absent-mindedly enjoy the dance of the butterfly! This is great!!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 1, 2012
Butterflies are hardy little insects that love the rain is much as we do. I hope you get the monsoon soon for there won't be food for the butterfly anymore.

Ron

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on July 1, 2012

Reviewed on June 30, 2012
Butterflies, rain, thunderstorms... .what could be more lovely :)
All my favorites, I could feel it in your prose

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 30, 2012
Erin
applause, hear the storm coming
Budd

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 30, 2012
You brought the scene alive with your descriptive talent...nicely done.
fee

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2012
...delicately deafening... ominously fragile... such juxtaposition... such an evocative study in contrasts... a poignant palimpsest of resonant images ringing with the purity of an innocent experienced eye... I echo Vivian... an impressive imagination!!

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on June 29, 2012
Such intriging imagination *Erin*
the thunder applauds, as You set
the butterfly free....

Lady Vivian


Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 29, 2012
You may not be able to walk by the sea, but with one good thunderstorm with rain and such you could be alot cooler...e


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