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Autumn Paths, Redressed

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, October 14, 2012

When traveling strange-paths of cool redress,
Just as though traveling Autumn’s thereon,
Remember to tip your brow to express
A fundamental disbelief, moved on.

Move on, again, across Autumn’s finesse!
Hold on to solid liquid fuel! Behold,
Slow world! Nature’s cloth has addressed
The patterns needed to unfold green gold!

When resting-weary graces life’s curved debt,
Just as though cradled by Autumn’s caress,
Slow world slumps into heartbeat’s silhouette
Creating absence-tied benevolence.

So shushed once more, Autumns fail, thereupon
I wish my mind good luck, battered-withdrawn.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/14/12
   


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Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on October 16, 2012
Such a paradox I read before me.
Autumn revealing her beauty.
And time to slow down, recover from life's turmoil.

Reviewed on October 15, 2012
Ah, "Nature's cloth......" is so beautiful, huh?

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
Nature is like the changing of the guard...Love
your words, Erin!

Deborah

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
a lovely piece love the imgery
I miss the Autumn leaves falling
no longer in the northeast mountain area
I can only dream about them
Thanks for sharing
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
As surely Autumn redresses
so must we bringing a calm
reserve knowing that we are
loved by pursuit of peace
wrapping it's arms around
You *Erin*

Lady Vivian, With Hugs


Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
Except for the sadness part, I couldn't make hide nor hair of this except to say it was as confused as perhaps that last line suggests.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
A prevailing tone of thoughtful sadness in this expression. Your last line, EEK-M, seems to ground the piece while establishing, (to this reader anyway) how well the similarities between personal life and nature are drawn through the passing of seasons. And, also how, at times, our hearts and minds are battered by storms (like nature) and life's seeming randomness. A poignant piece.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 15, 2012
Excellent sonnet, Erin. The world is not such a nice place to deal with at times, as you most adroitly point out in this piece. I love these two lines . . .

"Slow world slumps into heartbeat's silhouette
Creating absence-tied benevolence."


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