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When I Year(n)

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, January 8, 2013

When I year(n),
It quickly comes to pass, like a novel,
Constantly edited; I’m just smart enough
To realize I’m/It’s nothing new.

So, while I haven’t learned much,
I’ve learned plent(ious), as patterned
Visions constantly rearrange in the air above me,
Changing nothing as I am.

While I Lear(n),
I quickly cringe away, never a novel!
Never again! Constantly diverted excluded
From truth, as it is.

Then, when I started to yearn, we were dead!
Like a novel of self-sufferance! I guess
Paradise is lost. Sometimes it seems my heart,
Rebeating, starts its own year,

Over and over.
Twice as fast and tangible
As any unforgiving fear,
As I year(n). For a Gold Year.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 1/8/13
 


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Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on February 1, 2013
As free verse itself is unconventional, I enjoy your uncoventional free verse. Very nice indeed....

duke

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on January 31, 2013
Your feelings were nicely framed here in an very expressive poetic song.

WELL DONE!

God bless you,

John Michael Domino

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on January 26, 2013
I hope this year is gold for you.I like the part about your heart starting its own year...great insight,I really enjoyed this poem.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 20, 2013
as long as we yearn to learn, paradise will be regained ... keep your heart golden, Erin ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 18, 2013
Let us hope that all your fears are past and this is your golden year.

Ron

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on January 9, 2013
Please Continue *Erin*

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 9, 2013
continue to yearn, continue as long as you can
budd

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on January 9, 2013
I believe we all go through this, Erin. But you have said it very well. Nice work.


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