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Sitting on a Post

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, October 27, 2002

Sitting on a post,
in the middle
of the half-spent field
uncomfortably fits
the sense of Now's
age-related meaning...

Shafted, immobile, impaled on time's
yellow-brick road to the
(OLD) Emerald City, I am
(somehow greener and more greedy
in thechnicolor's glowing life,
but not in time's
sickly, feeble
gleam of phosphorescent strife,
oldly...
coldly...
not so boldly
as to blind,
glowing slowly,
shining lowly)
screaming,
"no, the harvest time
cannot have started
now"!

Sitting hard-ly,
jarring badly,
middle split by ravaged rhyme,
seems foolhardy, I'm so tardy,
I don't even know the time!
Oh so painful, tearing links
adhered in wood and petrified,
(so very weary, and the dreary-
ness of fear just makes me
leary, sick with
query, as to
"why am I alive...")
ripping freely,
from the bindings
as I ache
and rethink time,

now has
become
Now...

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/2/02

    

 

 



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Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Reviewed on August 21, 2008
Perhaps the finest piece of poetry ever to have graced canvas.




"glowing slowly,
shining lowly)
screaming,
"no, the harvest time
cannot have started
now"!"



Finally I find a REAL writer & Poet!

That knows how to heart-howl & whisper.

Kudos

Sincerely

Rodney Evan Bohen

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 19, 2008
i really like this early piece of yours

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 27, 2002
Halfway to glory or oblivion. I'd choose glory--go for it!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2002
Honey when you are much older, 43 is a beautiuful age. Bill

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on October 27, 2002
10-27-02

How You Accept It Is How You Endure It All!!

TRASK

Reviewed on October 27, 2002
i am 43 too..turned 43 back on june 26th. it IS hell gettin' old; the body don't work as well as it used to! ask my joints that!! :) love, your 43-year-old friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on October 27, 2002
Another one that's 43. :) Very good.

Love, Janet xoxoxoxo

Reviewed on October 27, 2002
Nice poem about turning 43, Erin!!!!! Thank you so much for your comments on my Halloween story "Pure Fantasy". Your comments are very much appreciated!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May LU $*_*$

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2002
I am with ya all too ... Good write.

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on October 27, 2002
i liked the "oz"-ey nature of this, like he scarecrow impaled on the pole, but it also had this "alice and wonderland" flow to it when you lamented "i don't even know the time." it reminded me of the rabbit in aiwonderland ... i'm late, i'm late, for a very important date. couple all of this with the proverbial "stick up your butt" feeling in this life and the paralyzing nature of wanting to embrace the now, this piece rocked on a pole.

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on October 27, 2002
I am 43 too!
Expressed perfectly!


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