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Within

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, November 2, 2002

She sees...beauty within,
liquid flowings and right-angles,
triumphant colors create and mix,
words sing and dance sweepingly,
imagination flares like a sun,
blinding her eyes
to reality...

All her life she’s lived within,
starting as a young child,
cherishing her mini cosmos,
fueled by books, by thoughts
of flighty-fancy and vivid
wide-high dreams, by
creativity.

Within...is a universe,
crooning love songs
in a purple language, hope
is chartreuse, laughter a blazing star
of sunset shafts, radiating out,
pulsing through corners,
bending time's lines,
fiery sparklers shoot
into her mind-sight...

She can speak eloquently
on keyboards, or in her mind,
rehearsing for meetings,
of substantiality,
trying to make it fit,
reality checks, ceasing
never-ending visions,
within...is night.

She sees...beauty within,
liquid flowings and right-angles,
triumphant colors create and mix,
words sing and dance sweepingly,
imagination flares like a sun,
blinding her eyes
to reality...

All her life she’s lived within,
starting as a young child,
cherishing her mini cosmos,
fueled by books, by thoughts
of flighty-fancy and vivid
wide-high dreams, by
creativity.

Within...is a universe,
crooning love songs
in a purple language, hope
is chartreuse, laughter a blazing star
of sunset shafts, radiating out,
pulsing through corners,
bending time's lines,
fiery sparklers shoot
into her mind-sight...

She can speak eloquently
on keyboards, or in her mind,
rehearsing for meetings,
of substantiality,
trying to make it fit,
reality checks, ceasing
never-ending visions,
within...is night.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 8/21/02


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Reviewed by Sean O'Connell (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2002
Sadly, her beauty is within and she must find the strength to shout it out to the world. Sad thoughts beautifully expressed

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 2, 2002
this really hit me tonight. great sculpting in this poem with word choice, too. thanks.

Reviewed by Betty Rickard (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2002
Sad but, so well written...Excellent..
Betty

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2002
Indeed this is well crafted and a delight to read....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2002
We have to have the sad poems too
This is well thought out...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 2, 2002
Erin you are a delight to read even when sad, but I find this so beautifully crafted, your light from within shines through;-)

Reviewed on November 2, 2002
Many poets are like this. You are very observant!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on November 2, 2002
I'm with Larry this is outstanding! Wonderfully written,,,very sad,,,Lisa

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on November 2, 2002
outstanding verse

Reviewed on November 2, 2002
erin, i find this so sad...it seems that no one accepts her, so she turns within, where she is perfect. "reality checks, ceasing/never-ending visions/within...is night." haunting...but very well written! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(


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