Fiery Splash
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Points of light begin the dance,
they bow and soar and meet askance,
in blue-glow flight,
of cyber night
and start to weave
hypnotic trance.
Colored sparks take up the sway,
coming through mind's disarray,
they march in rhyme,
hum-voiced, sublime,
and send up scents
of word's bouquet.
Sunburst starlets flare and flash
lancing into creative cache,
the sight so strong,
eye's banquet song,
poetry written
with fiery splash.
Erin Moen
9/30/02
Saturday, November 9, 2002
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Love from India - Joel -
Amor
wonderful!
Oh Yeah, love the pace and rhythm in this! All the stanza's flow beautifully, but I really enjoyed this one...
"Colored sparks take up the sway,
coming through mind's disarray,
they march in rhyme,
hum-voiced, sublime,
and send up scents
of word's bouquet."
Smiling!
Hugs,
Maria
far away a starlight shore. Two lover's meet and are touching hands, then suddenly your love is at his command. Can you understand the passion spent in loving him. What fun, what joy. The night supreme. Just what rolled off the top of my head when I read your sweet poem. Forgive a crazy old man his babbles. Bill