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Eyes-Star-Struck...Not! (Ode to the Leonids)

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

I woke up in the middle of the night,
got reading about the sight, others had seen..
so I jumped up, oughtta my chair,
wrapped my big robe 'round me,
to stop cool night's air,
and took myself outside, star-struck..

First shock of aumumn's night-time cold,
made me wish I hadn't been so bold, but I stood,
and gazed at the skies of softened wash,
full moon's glow being not so low,
eagerly awaiting a flash,
my streak of star-hued luck..

The minutes of seeping cold slowly spun by, and,
as I'm peering way up high, I saw some lights
shooting and scooting so fast, but,
that didn't look right,
the colors weren't so bright,
more like man-made star-muck..

I gasped, in my mind, and heard myself mutter,
"UFO!", believing it was so, I was all aflutter,
then, oh my god, there is another!
But, this one I could see,
was not going to fool me,
it had the star-backed form of a duck!

I look to the first light, and see there are more,
highways of light, I hear jet-fuel's faint roar,
how could this be, no streaking for me!
I turn to the house without gains,
cursing low-flying night planes,
and NOT with eyes-star-struck!

Erin Moen
11/20/02

Wednesday, November 20, 2002

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Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2002
Star struck eyes don't see sp well. You let them put you under a magic spell and they look what happened. A very good poem dear. Bill

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 20, 2002
love your images and humor;-)...
( So you have a relationship similar to mine;-)Way to go!

Reviewed on November 20, 2002
cute write, erin! so sorry you missed the leonids. they were terrific! (saw several more this morning, but nothing like yesterday morning!) love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)

Reviewed on November 20, 2002
*grins* adorable write, erin...wish you could have seen the leonids, they were *awesome* (as is this poem) dang those low flying airplanes and ufo's! :) thanks for your cute review on my "leonids" write...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) (one of the drooling twins)

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2002
It is Plane to see that this one really takes off. I was propelled into the fun of this write

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2002
This one was really cute and funny. Good write.

Reviewed by Lucy
Reviewed on November 20, 2002
i just love your writings.. You made me smile , ok giggle with this one..
Great job as always :)
Lucy

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on November 20, 2002
funny
I can see you all wrapped up
great images

Reviewed by Afrika Abney
Reviewed on November 20, 2002
Unique write. Thanks for sharing.

Afrika M.A.Abney

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2002
I really like this, the element of surprise.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2002
Sorry bout your luck. It was awesome! Cute write.


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