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The (Un)Life of a Child

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

My life is normal, my kids, safe...
*my kids are safe*...are my kids safe?
My kids are safe.

(Have you ever thought...
of the terror of a child
who's been abducted?
*parent's soul wrenches, is ravaged,
beyond repair* I see
horrible images...My mind
cringes~why would anyone...?)

My two girls, are safe, here,
this small town, *he had
visitation rights* is safe...
my kids are safe.

(I can't stop thinking
about "perversion",
obsession, compulsion,
human "nature"...? I...*"die"*
each time I see this,
when I *I die* mind-see
the inhuman horror...)

My girls, I drive them to school,
here, in my safe small town, I
drive my kids to school, only
a city block away, my kids are...safe..

(In my "realized" adult mind,
I cringe, I know, I've seen, I
*want to die, why?
why?
why?
she was a baby, a child, a hope, a
child, she was a child*
learn to hate
predators of filth, of genes, of
enviromental influences, I
hate..I have learned
to hate. I *die*, I
*die*, I *hate* that
I couldn't save "her",
that I
didn't keep "him" tied
by my side, I
am
guilty, yes, I will always be
guilty, I *am dead*
die
every day, like my
child...)

(my child...*tearing sob*
my baby, my child, my life...
I...die every day.)

My kids are...safe.

Erin Moen
12/3/02



Tuesday, December 3, 2002

My kids are...safe?


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Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on December 5, 2002
so powerful and frightening...so, just yes, hauntingly intensely written...thank you for that/this...

Reviewed by Paul Bright (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
it's a natural wonder who children can turn people into the most caring and most viscious persons all at the same time. Wonderful work. I totally identify.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
intense witre! i have some personal knowledge of abduction... my mother died when i was 3 days old... when i was 3 years old my father returned and took me from the home of his borther & wife whom I thought were my parents... all i can say, is the child has to be strong...

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
I am with Dani, it's a scary world.

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
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Reviewed on December 4, 2002
i am glad your two girls are safe, but too many other kids and their families aren't as fortunate! sad, emotional write that packs quite the powerful punch! thanks for sharing! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :( >tears <

Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Sweetie, this is such a powerful emotional write and I have to agree with Eileen here. God Bless All The Children... Take care sweetie...

Reviewed by Sally Montoye (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Like creates more like....you have expressed that well here. Great write!!!

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
exceptional expression
are any of us safe
great job

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
I used to think Oz was as safe a country as you'd ever get....but nowhere is safe. We just have to have eyes in the back of our heads...Great thoughts. Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
Good writing Erin, read anywhere in Psalm
if your in a valley

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
Excellent write of anquish
and pain. Are our children
ever safe? Your write displays
perfectly the ache of a heart
waiting to hear about their
child. As you say, Erin..
Is any child safe??

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
I can understand especially after the Amber Alert, but I hope you don't let it prey on your mind for it can wreak havoc...great write though!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
Erin this is from an emotional place I have never been. What a brilliant display of suffering and unrest in your soul. You had to walk this path alone. I can only reach out my hand to you and extend it to pull you in and pull the ones you love with you. What emotional depth, what a heavy angst in your heart. Tears are falling in your soul. God bless and keep you. Bill Murray.

Reviewed by jing javier
Reviewed on December 3, 2002
great deep emotional write..


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