I See More...
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
I wish there was a "Drunken Ramblings" category, this would be my offering! After a long Christmas Day, and much "good-will cheering" with my best friend over the phone, simo-shotwise, this was my bewildering attempt at capturing the "Feeling" of the moment.
I wander, as I ponder,
and I wonder
on thoughts of life.
I reason, as I'm seasoned,
as I breeze on
late thoughts of life.
I run on, as I come on,
as I live on
in my children's lives.
I see more, as I live more,
as I give more
to human life.
I sweetly, lay my soul down,
as I look 'round
at earthly life.
I am more, than my thought-core,
as I learn more
of human life.
I think more, as an avator,
as I'm deemed more,
than real thoughts on life.
I am more, I can see poor,
I am so much more,
I am a life.
Erin Moen
12/25/02
Friday, December 27, 2002
It's been rated "flowy", "fantastic poem breaking from the norm" and "wonderful little pattern......great idea and great ideas". I feel it weakens abit towards the end...;)
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Happy New Year Erin!!!!!
~ Sandie and Buddy ~
Cheers to this one
beautiful, more than meets the eye....Bless You Erin....May the New Year bring better times to all and this just held me and makes me want to read again and ponder...+++
mi :)
This is great, yes it has excellent flow, and I will be reading this a few times! I am with Ted, have another drink on us, this was really an enjoyable read!
Happy New Year to you!!!!
Hugs,
Maria