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String of Life

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

(In her dream's light,
she holds the starting knot tightly,
fingering it's hopeful shape,
trembling slightly, engrossed,
she watches as Time
begins to weave her fate.)

Sweet youth's pink toned soaring with sun-yellow dreams
and childhood memories of lavendar-green,
encircle the blue and red roughness of string,
tight woven start to the nature of being.

(She gazes along, and smiles,
burgeoning maturity swoons
with mixed feelings, and
tiny snarls and frays
appear, patchable with
silken energy and care.)

Sky blues and grey rains of lover's brand new sight,
combine with angst shadows of zinc's orange-white
beginning the pattern of future's unknown,
pausing to add the hue of world's arctic cold.

(She sees herself reach
her gossamer hands, wanting
to feel the giddiness
of time's placement,
noting stains of life's
accumulation.)

Blurring swirls of color speed weaving of string,
cacophonous purples and dark blues coil-cling,
fraying the warp's colored strength and creating
thickening strands weight, with metallic plating.

(Eyes traveling along
the contoured curves of her story,
widen with enchantment,
as star-blazed glow
of children
moltenly intertwine.)

Passage to new worlds of platinum design,
undulate with two girl's of silver divine,
looping new orbits with magenta fluoresce,
covering day's thread in rainbow's fancy dress.

(Future's mist of new time
descends into view, clouding
her vision's breathing sighs,
awakening, she sees far ahead
another life-shaped knot,
held in gossamer hands.)

Erin Moen
1/11/03
Copyright 2003 ©

Saturday, January 11, 2003

Inspired by anne cunningham's "Dream Catcher". Thank you, anne. :)


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Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
I just love layers to explore and tease the mind
this is a read over if ever i saw one.
not only for the message but the beautiful scenery also

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on January 13, 2003
Erin,
Love this tapestry of work! It can be read many ways, that is Great Poetry!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
good expression and well written

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
So wonderfully expressive! I can see the colors.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
a string of profound thoughts & images...

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
Breath taking .. excellant work ... j

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
Excellent Erin....Like a rainbow of thought...ty, Dani

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
I have a friend who tries to shove parenthesis down my throat, makes me crazy and for the most part I find their use ineffective in a poem. NOT the case here, in fact, quite the opposite. Erin, this one blew my mind...what a gift you have.

Reviewed by anne cunningham
Reviewed on January 12, 2003
... silly, silly string ... way to go with this erin ... the color was tremendous throughout

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
This was Great Erin!
Jack

Reviewed by Jack Roberts
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
Oh, this is such a beautiful, image filled piece. Wonderful. So many smart lines here. Much enjoyed.

Be well,
Michael

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
Oh you and the magnificent imagery dreamy.
peggy

Reviewed on January 11, 2003
Erin, you have painted a beautiful picture with your words. Nice!
God Bless,
Tim

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
Wow....great write.. excellent imagery.
Jenni

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
Excellent

Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
Erin,
I read this a few times and picked up something new each time. Very thought provoking write. Enjoyed greatly.

Hugs,
The Voice

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 11, 2003
Wonderful colors Erin. Terrific poetry.

--Susan


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